These are fabulous pre-production pieces Yousuf. I am really impressed with them. Well done.
However there are a couple of improvements you could make. Firstly, remove all page numbers from the covers, these are on the contents page rather than the cover.
Also the use of different fonts and colours for the "New Year, New Body" strap line is confusing and makes it look like two separate strap lines. On the "Outside" cover, I think you need to consider another strap line for the top right hand corner under the masthead where there is a gap, this needs filling really in order to give the impression of a good value magazine.
These are fabulous pre-production pieces Yousuf. I am really impressed with them. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHowever there are a couple of improvements you could make. Firstly, remove all page numbers from the covers, these are on the contents page rather than the cover.
Also the use of different fonts and colours for the "New Year, New Body" strap line is confusing and makes it look like two separate strap lines. On the "Outside" cover, I think you need to consider another strap line for the top right hand corner under the masthead where there is a gap, this needs filling really in order to give the impression of a good value magazine.